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又是夏季，又想起莲

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Posted: 2008-07-17 06:40:29 Post subject: 又是夏季，又想起莲

我只是一朵孤单的莲苍白的粉红了千年清令开在倾城的外面裹住的伤心你看不见烈日不能溶化冻结的缘月色后映不到你清澈的笑脸只有等你。等你带起的风吹破我静止的水面款款洒落的缠绵 07/17/2008

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Posted: 2008-07-17 07:02:52 Post subject:

用韵了！苍白的粉红了千年有疑义！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-07-17 07:28:12 Post subject: 抬起的剪刀，停在半空

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

用韵了！

苍白的
粉红了千年

有疑义！

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Posted: 2008-07-17 08:31:28 Post subject:

又是夏季，又想起莲...... _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-07-17 11:27:41 Post subject:

我们新成立一个莲花教 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-17 11:58:07 Post subject: 拥你做教主

红袖添乱 wrote:

我们新成立一个莲花教

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Posted: 2008-07-17 12:33:34 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

我们新成立一个莲花教

那你先写个莲花落（lao~)
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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-17 15:23:27 Post subject: 马上给任务呀，偶不拥你了~。我得查查莲花落咋写

红袖添乱 wrote:

悠子 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

我们新成立一个莲花教

那你先写个莲花落（lao~)

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Posted: 2008-07-18 15:10:33 Post subject:

不禁让人想起一朵西湖中的莲!

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Posted: 2008-07-20 19:32:24 Post subject:

【粉红了千年的莲】已经是莲的魂了

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Posted: 2008-07-20 20:54:45 Post subject:

《梅花落》哪？ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-21 04:49:26 Post subject: 莲花落来了

红袖添乱 wrote:

《梅花落》哪？

我是一朵修行千年的莲
千年修行纤尘不染的容颜
荷塘深处可有人听见我绝唱的琴弦
春花秋月里可有人记得我藕断丝连

我是一朵等待千年的莲
千年等待你回顾的瞬间
茫茫人海里谁在意我不胜凉风的思念
涟涟碧水中谁将和我同诉并蒂的缠绵

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Posted: 2008-07-21 18:02:25 Post subject:

好棒~~~喜欢 34 and 34 句。藕断丝连用的好。。并蒂的缠绵好琴弦吗？那，再写个《梅花落》？？：））））））））））））））））））））））））莲花教不好听，梅花教好听呀~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-21 20:06:18 Post subject:

清。。。高！说莲 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-07-22 06:18:11 Post subject: 搞笑的，这两天听<白狐>中毒了。你喜欢就好。梅花

红袖添乱 wrote:

好棒~~~喜欢 34 and 34 句。
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落，等梅花的季节吧~ 教主不能太麻烦

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Posted: 2008-07-22 12:00:37 Post subject:

我麻烦吗？我哪里有~~~ 好吧~~等等。。。我也琢磨琢磨去~~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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