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五律 友聚(和秋叶)
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PostPosted: 2008-07-17 00:33:41    Post subject: 五律 友聚(和秋叶) Reply with quote

五律 友聚(和秋叶)

其一(仄起步原韵)
周末友相聚,盛情融酒浆。
菜苗绿又嫩,花卉艳还香。
庭院留春色,清茶消暑凉。
天涯有挚友,再会醉夕阳。

其二(平起步原韵)
闲暇邀友聚,烤肉配琼浆。
谈笑添肴美,浓情拌酒香。
东篱植豆菜,后院纳清凉。
天鹤逍遥处,桃源胜洛阳。

其三
多城值盛夏,邀友品琼浆。
剪韭慕陶隐,蒸醇效杜康。
心随天地阔,话论古今长。
海外存知己,沙龙翰墨香。


秋叶原玉:
五律--友聚

夏日偷闲聚, 主人倾酒浆。
新炊闻盛意, 烤肉伴花香。
感慨怀陈事, 唏嘘话炙凉。
酩酊情未尽, 惜别在斜阳。


五律—— 沙龙友聚欢饮盼重逢

—— 和秋叶五律 (新韵)

文:天是鹤家乡

龙友东篱聚,箪壶溢荇浆。
玫瑰漫蕊魂,笑语荡书香。
陋室盈浓荫,高朋好纳凉。
邀约再有期,倚户醉夕阳。


夏日友聚

文:天舞飘零
夏日寻芳客,相逢曳玉浆。
瑰华浮晕赧,满腹沁醇香。
骤雨嘉禾碧,浓荫澄暑凉。
别辰怀赏忆,放梦浴夕阳。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-17 07:11:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

唱和俱佳,特喜欢五律其三.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-17 15:19:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
唱和俱佳,特喜欢五律其三.

黄老师是五律高手。谢黄老师欣赏。问夏日好!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-17 15:27:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

赏读。问好 Razz
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 12:22:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
赏读。问好 Razz

谢谢莹雪MM!问夏日好!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-19 06:51:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

好意境,还有好胃口.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-19 14:20:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航 wrote:
好意境,还有好胃口.

谢野航兄赏读。问好!
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