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《一个梦:醉酒》
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PostPosted: 2008-07-12 18:49:32    Post subject: 《一个梦:醉酒》 Reply with quote

《一个梦:醉酒》

我是在清晨的饥饿中,
坠入醉死的梦乡。
沉重一直让我闭着眼,拒绝看
人间的一切。但似乎知道事物的进行,
显微镜下,局部纤毫清晰。

我不记得喝酒,
可知道自己醉着。
我记得有人赠送过几张入场卷,
(华贵、高雅的音乐会),
一直叮嘱要用别物还回去。

所有人都失踪了?
跌跌撞撞在屋子里走着,
妄想闭眼穿过所有的小屋。
我走着,不知心系何处,
我的眼睛只看见脚。

似乎就走出了。如果最后
那道门不从外面反锁。
回头,路线不同了。
我说渴,有人笑着请喝茶。
感觉是白开水,但最后嚼到茶叶的苦。

回到荒芜的后院,
不见花草树木,只有淤泥厚积。
我在最里面,大门的光亮处站着母亲:
“你要自己走出来,我们不能救你。”
祖父吹胡子:“你怎可以醉生梦死?”
噢,他已死去多年,梦中仍然活着。

我尝试往出走,脚底的淤泥并不下陷,
它承受住了我的重与轻。
门铃突然炸响,急促的铃声
掀开了大门,掀开了沉重的眼皮:
手机里一个号码持续拨打,我不接。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-12 20:10:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

怪不得打半天没人接呢。。。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-07-12 20:14:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈, 我来接 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-07-13 00:55:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
怪不得打半天没人接呢。。。 Laughing
不好意思,睡过头了~你再打,我肯定接~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-07-13 00:56:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
哈, 我来接 Very Happy
呵呵,白水好!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-14 01:40:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活处处诗处处,一种生存方式与态度的展现!
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天汉阿文
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PostPosted: 2008-07-14 02:44:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

日常经验之外,有一点点非常。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-17 07:30:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好晴宝儿和阿文~
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 08:06:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习!!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 20:27:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

……到底接了没接,后来?
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PostPosted: 2008-08-25 02:34:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

七小姐 wrote:
……到底接了没接,后来?


没接,单位喊我加班呢,星期六义务贡献一天不说,星期天的懒觉都不让人睡,况且我在梦里醉生梦死的,正安逸,害我的好梦都没做成.不然这诗歌还有下文啊~
呵呵,虽然后来挨一顿批,也值!
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PostPosted: 2008-08-25 02:43:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

妹妹你好
梦是女人的路
路是女人的鞋
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