曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-09 17:37:45 Post subject: 回忆 |
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风吹开千百叶窗扇
落我一身眼睛
此刻太阳的雨
被一种鸟声叫走了
伞都挣脱了手
去参加一些集会
我和没有腿的树叶
一起走着秋 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-10 06:26:19 Post subject: |
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好看。风格有些不同? |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-10 09:18:40 Post subject: |
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文字的跳跃里,维持着连惯性。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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拈花微笑 秀才
Joined: 21 Jan 2008 Posts: 311
拈花微笑Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-10 09:29:05 Post subject: |
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"文字的跳跃里,维持着连惯性" (zt) _________________ 瞠目结舌 |
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曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-11 01:20:12 Post subject: |
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谢谢 |
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