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在水边

风的声音
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风的声音Collection

Posted: 2008-07-05 05:00:45 Post subject: 在水边

《在水边》文/风声站在小河边，望水中的女子戏水的姿势。只见她轻纱环身，像浅雾中的峰峦丰韵秀美，若隐若现... 我的目光，如水—— 清澈我静静地望着她，耳听着清脆的笑声不知不觉，忘了年纪我仿佛仍然年轻把她幻想成爱人的模样我的爱人温柔笑着在把我召唤，声声撩动心扉于是，在坚强的片刻之后蓝天迷失了通联：河北省石家庄市深泽县建设东路医药药材公司陈翠玲转彭亚龙（收）邮编052560 QQ381635035 邮箱yifeng728@sina.com _________________ 欢迎大家到我的博客交流指导http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengyalong

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-07-05 05:28:10 Post subject:

题目不错.《在水边》.

风的声音
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风的声音Collection

Posted: 2008-07-09 17:11:18 Post subject:

请您多指教，问好！ _________________ 欢迎大家到我的博客交流指导http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengyalong

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