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荷叶杯—荷花

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-07-09 15:13:13 Post subject: 荷叶杯—荷花

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黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-07-09 16:39:28 Post subject:

上阕闲适,下阕落寞,透露出思绪的变化. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-07-09 18:01:43 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

上阕闲适,下阕落寞,透露出思绪的变化.

谢谢黄老点评！

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-07-11 22:52:20 Post subject:

欣赏莹雪好词！

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-07-17 15:22:28 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

欣赏莹雪好词！

谢谢荷梦关注！

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