莹雪
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雨来电掣裂空喧，风去云消退暑烦。
掩卷沉思归梦境，回眸弄笔遣诗魂。 |
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2008-07-06 04:41:36 Post subject: |
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"回眸弄笔遣诗魂",莹雪好像是不可一日无诗之人啊!
"退"字可否换作'退"字?
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2008-07-06 14:54:18 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
"回眸弄笔遣诗魂",莹雪好像是不可一日无诗之人啊!
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呵呵，黄老过誉！ 
“遣”（qiǎn）纵也。——《说文》 |
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2008-07-07 06:55:50 Post subject: |
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上次敲字有误,"推"字可否换作"退"字?
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2008-07-07 16:28:07 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
| 上次敲字有误,"推"字可否换作"退"字? |
谢谢黄老斧正！已经修改。  |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2008-07-07 16:58:01 Post subject: |
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| 莹雪MM写景抒情，黄老师一字之师。好！ |
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2008-07-08 14:50:38 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 莹雪MM写景抒情 |
谢谢qinghongGG点评！偶有所感，我马马虎虎的，也没仔细看看输入是否正确 |
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