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【朕,活在80后】
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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 20:40:50    Post subject: 【朕,活在80后】 Reply with quote

朕,活在80后


朕 我从来没有想过 如果
我不坐 那个位子会永远空着

我很不愿 这是心语 只是无奈
谁让 80后有我的一段生活

我有一栋别致的小楼 缀着星星
眨呀眨的 在梦里编织着童话

在驾证的考卷上 我画了一幅草图
简简单单 一辆二八轻便自行车

我知道 我的朕没有轿子
后宫里结着蛛网 冷冷地
迷着我的双眸 暗淡了
生在80后 朕一无所有

可 朕是天之骄子 龙床上
让朕再睡会 明朝
朕还要上朝

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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 21:54:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

可 朕是天之骄子 龙床上
让朕再睡会 明朝
朕还要上朝


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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 17:20:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

好玩.提读
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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 23:42:07    Post subject: 【朕,活在80后】 Reply with quote

感谢那两行小评,加油在路上——
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