拈花微笑 秀才
Joined: 21 Jan 2008 Posts: 311
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Posted: 2008-07-02 09:23:23 Post subject: 阅读之无象 |
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博弈兄<阅读>系列颇有趣。技痒,涂鸦之。博一笑耳。
<阅读之无象 >
1.
清风不识字
却在瞬间读完
案头的书
2.
古碑上
文字湮没莫辩
在时间里
有着
完整 的
残
缺缺
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我和一张白纸
干干净净地
相视而笑 _________________ 瞠目结舌 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-02 09:56:34 Post subject: |
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我和一张白纸
干干净净地
心照不宣~~~ |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-02 09:57:56 Post subject: |
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在时间里 有着 完整 的 残 缺 -- 精辟 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
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Posted: 2008-07-02 10:28:37 Post subject: |
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清风不识字
却在瞬间读完
案头的书
美~~
把书藏好,别被它偷了秘密 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
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Posted: 2008-07-02 12:54:17 Post subject: |
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我和一张白纸
干干净净地
相看不厌 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-02 13:35:30 Post subject: |
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白纸招惹谁了 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-02 15:14:27 Post subject: |
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拈花兄作品已经达到雅俗共赏的境地! _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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Lake 举人

Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
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Posted: 2008-07-02 15:38:50 Post subject: |
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Very Zen. Zan! _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-02 16:15:53 Post subject: |
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物象的移转。说是无物却有象。确实不错!
阅读一系列,主要是说阅读的修炼与重要,
强调阅读者的介入诗,而使诗最后完成,本此精神
故冠以“阅读”二字,否则,单其后的字为题即可。 _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-02 22:55:57 Post subject: |
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【清风】 【古碑】 【白纸】这三个词的组合本身就是一个神往得意境 |
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苏茉儿 秀才
Joined: 31 Dec 2007 Posts: 739
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Posted: 2008-07-03 07:04:54 Post subject: |
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一字好,两个字就是欣赏。很喜欢第二个。 _________________ 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。 |
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拈花微笑 秀才
Joined: 21 Jan 2008 Posts: 311
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Posted: 2008-07-06 17:38:01 Post subject: |
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谢谢诸位阅读点评  _________________ 瞠目结舌 |
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