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夏雨纷洒而过

悠子
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Posted: 2008-06-29 17:33:58 Post subject: 夏雨纷洒而过

夏雨纷洒而过一树桑果不经意被打落染紫的足迹融化在寂寞的雨中模糊成伤感听着鸟用欢快的声音赶走黄昏今夜无眠采摘树叶上的星星泊在你的眼帘执一瓣苍白的微笑用荒谬的语言索取思念 06/29/2008

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Posted: 2008-06-29 21:40:15 Post subject:

好!拿牙签撑着~ 这由后头往前写的? _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

悠子
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Posted: 2008-06-30 04:57:30 Post subject: 哈，我语无伦次。昨天黄昏开着太阳下大雨....

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

好!拿牙签撑着~

这由后头往前写的?

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Posted: 2008-06-30 14:32:12 Post subject:

可惜，那一树桑椹。用来酿酒，会很不错。。。 _________________ 瞠目结舌

悠子
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Posted: 2008-06-30 14:39:21 Post subject: 原来你也是个贪酒的~ 要怪也只能怪那雨

拈花微笑 wrote:

可惜，那一树桑椹。用来酿酒，会很不错。。。

Smile

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Posted: 2008-07-01 15:50:50 Post subject:

悠子，我们的格式差不多。那诗盗说的对咧，从后面读很完整呢。哈哈。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

悠子
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Posted: 2008-07-02 06:08:28 Post subject:

茉茉好。跟你的诗不能比啦。我最近没有心情，写两笔滥竽充数

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Posted: 2008-07-02 10:33:38 Post subject:

于是，鸟用欢快的声音又打破黎明~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

悠子
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Posted: 2008-07-02 13:33:20 Post subject: 嗯，好

红袖添乱 wrote:

于是，鸟用欢快的声音又打破黎明~~

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Posted: 2008-07-03 07:02:57 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

茉茉好。跟你的诗不能比啦。我最近没有心情，写两笔滥竽充数

悠子不要谦虚，各有异香，我们。欣赏悠子的作品，一如既往！
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