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【101病室】
丘河
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PostPosted: 2008-06-25 01:03:55    Post subject: 【101病室】 Reply with quote

101病室

101病室,不知何时
躺了我一张小小的床

上面寄存着我的几滴臭汗
有一个问题简简单单,却在我的枕边夭折

天花板由42块晃成45块,终于
它又晃了回来,在我还清醒的时候

漂亮的小护士将我推醒,向我喋喋地抱怨
鲜红的液体,沿着导管开始偷偷地回流

伴着临床小情人手机里飘出的调子
我在数着眼前的星星

窗外的雷声响了,雨点滑过树叶的纹脉
滴在泥土里,一下子凉透了它的心

隔着浓浓的云层,一条温热的短信落下
砸在我潮润的心坎上,一秒钟、三千里

是谁复活了一个概念
101病室,留在了我后脚根儿的印迹里

这并不荒唐——太阳躲在乌云里阴阴地笑
我在感冒,不是天的缘故


2008年6月25日
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PostPosted: 2008-06-27 20:52:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

别出心裁的画面。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-28 03:52:08    Post subject: 发表于: 2008-06-25 01:03 发表主题: 【101病室】 Reply with quote

这并不荒唐——太阳躲在乌云里阴阴地笑
我在感冒,不是天的缘故



有种颓废的感觉~欣赏这样的笔调!
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丘河
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PostPosted: 2008-06-28 22:29:05    Post subject: 【101病室】 Reply with quote

丘河问好各位,谢谢评点,学习了——
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PostPosted: 2008-06-29 17:34:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有感觉 Very Happy
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