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乡野刀尖上的花
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PostPosted: 2008-06-19 23:58:25    Post subject: 乡野刀尖上的花 Reply with quote

野天荒湖
花儿的最爱
只要是花
皆可恣意盛开
日月星不着一缕
花间草丛飞去奔来
小鸟歌唱声里
花儿抹粉施薰
汀葭私语声中
天堂花上摇下摆
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俟走近村前屋后
花儿却生了疥癞
人们为了生存
先将田园长满稻麦
然后才将田头地边
施舍给可怜乞丐
生存的铁锤
将乡村钉上锅盖
谋生的重担
将花儿压成畸胎
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旮旯愈隐蔽
花儿愈放异彩
缕缕花香
激荡心湖情海
森森刀尖
弹奏地魄天籁
纵死一百回
也要一竞风采
今夜乡野月光下
谁刀尖上丢魂失骸
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08年6月
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PostPosted: 2008-06-20 06:22:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

很密集~
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PostPosted: 2008-06-20 22:18:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

这是描写乡野性爱的
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PostPosted: 2008-06-20 22:54:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

钓月 wrote:
这是描写乡野性爱的

Surprised 怪不得第一次看不明白. 原来有玄机.
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 17:50:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

刀尖上的花是个大家不太熟悉的意象,但应该想想就明白了!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 17:58:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

有点晕 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 20:34:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

读着有应接不暇之感。。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-22 22:42:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢阅读
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