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乡野刀尖上的花

钓月
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Posted: 2008-06-19 23:58:25 Post subject: 乡野刀尖上的花

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Posted: 2008-06-20 06:22:26 Post subject:

很密集～

钓月
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Posted: 2008-06-20 22:18:04 Post subject:

这是描写乡野性爱的 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-06-20 22:54:08 Post subject:

钓月 wrote:

这是描写乡野性爱的

怪不得第一次看不明白. 原来有玄机.
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钓月
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Posted: 2008-06-21 17:50:51 Post subject:

刀尖上的花是个大家不太熟悉的意象,但应该想想就明白了! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-06-21 17:58:37 Post subject:

有点晕

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Posted: 2008-06-21 20:34:30 Post subject:

读着有应接不暇之感。。

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Posted: 2008-06-22 22:42:04 Post subject:

谢谢阅读 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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