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如此
马彦
童生


Joined: 27 Mar 2008
Posts: 50
Location: 江苏
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PostPosted: 2008-06-19 06:37:47    Post subject: 如此 Reply with quote

如此
我的骨头秘密地
弯弯地疼了一下
所有的树叶
绿的外衣
绿的肌肤
绿的呼吸
瘦瘦地走向我

我答应过你
如果你寂寞
我将用更大的寂寞
好好地拥抱你

你呻吟着
从绿色的胸膛里吐出浅灰色
别怕!我来喂你吃药
吃一味叫做西湖十景的中草药
用开放的夏荷做药引
用躺倒的断桥做药勺

大地和天空偷偷约会
恋爱,分娩满天星辰
每晚,这群小兄妹们
安静地望着
沉睡的人和忙碌的人
高个子的人和矮个子的人

2008.6.19
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司马策风
举人


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Location: 温哥华
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PostPosted: 2008-06-19 22:24:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

想象出色.构思奇巧.

整篇来讲,稍显凌乱.

问好
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