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好想捧住一次垂落之姿
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PostPosted: 2008-06-17 18:50:21    Post subject: 好想捧住一次垂落之姿 Reply with quote
翩飞的蝶儿，我好想
好想捧住你
捧住一次你的垂落之姿
让心底抑止不住的目光
看清翼翅上的神秘

六月的早晨，阳光
直泻下来，真耀眼啊
你的身姿那么轻，那么灵
而我的眷恋，这么重
这么笨
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 07:53:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
跟蝴蝶谈恋爱了？
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 08:05:40    Post subject: 而且好像谈得不顺利~ Reply with quote
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跟蝴蝶谈恋爱了？
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 08:11:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
很美的诗，我读着读着，一直读到最后一句。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 10:08:56    Post subject: 恩，每个字都看懂了。不错！ Reply with quote
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很美的诗，我读着读着，一直读到最后一句。。。


原来平常读不到最后一句！
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 10:54:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
怜花惜蝶~~
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 17:41:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢诸位点评。

另一读解可以是：蝶，喻美的本体。＂重＂和＂笨＂暗示语言的局限，或作者本人运用语言的技艺不精，无法恰如其分地把握那只翩飞的蝶－－美。徒唤柰何。

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