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花儿与少年—校园诗篇
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PostPosted: 2007-01-29 21:05:29    Post subject: 花儿与少年—校园诗篇 Reply with quote

(一) 花心思

晨曦不透
酣睡的青鸟不醒
我的眸一如那空寂的校园
静等黎明

春雨不洒
娇嫩的红玫不艳
我的心犹如那干涸的水田
久待浇灌

翩翩地 你走来
一只青鸟 唤醒树林和小径
喧闹的校园晨露闪金

翩翩地 你走来
飘逸的云 滑过山岗与田野
湿润的天空飘落甘泉

目光抚过的花朵
娇鲜欲滴
足迹掠过的小径
芳草如茵
你眼角的笑意 脚底的春风
无不把英才和得意随意抛撒

那么 我
在不在你的目光我都不能不说:
没有你
即使多雨的季节
我的心仍在干涸
你不来
面对沸腾的校园
我的湖一如静水
……

蓦地 絮语嘎然而止
屏住呼吸 竟有纤针落地的声音
眼前
翩翩地 你走来


(二) 窗前少年

窗外月亮不来
即使漫布繁星银河
我的天空仍是黯然失色

窗前花儿没开
纵然满树桃花李花
我的春天还是遥遥无期

傍晚的云霞美如红焰
临窗的少年怅若苍穹
无情的夜帷即将悬挂
多忧的晚风伴谁消愁?

如果 那朵最美的红霞
是你优雅的身姿
那我 一定和你相守
直到夜幕笼窗
你的轮廓慢慢溶进月色
我的身影渐渐并入黑黝

卸下浓妆的霞影啊
何处将是你歇息的归宿?


(三) 岁月

校园的花儿开了又谢了
路边的枫叶红了又掉了
无论岁月
刻下多少个阴晴圆缺
不管人生
经历多少次聚散离合
值得珍藏的 仍然是
花儿与少年的青春回忆
不曾褪色的 却还是
当年瑰丽的校园诗篇
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Helena
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PostPosted: 2007-01-29 21:07:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首诗已送给了我的朋友, 中学同学. 尽管这么多年没见,但在我的眼中,他们永远定格在十六,七岁的花季年龄.
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PostPosted: 2007-01-29 22:55:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

很真诚的写作
感觉有一定的潜力
继续努力
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-30 03:39:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

很纯真的诗歌~问好! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-30 03:51:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎你,多努力。
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PostPosted: 2007-01-30 08:29:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

美好的回忆
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PostPosted: 2007-02-01 12:35:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢各位朋友的评阅和鼓励,还望多指正。
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