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小词二手
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PostPosted: 2008-06-16 11:29:56    Post subject: 小词二手 Reply with quote

《摹印.鹧鸪天》
碑碣沉沉草篆铭,瓦当石鼓喑雷霆。斜晖一抹秋风劲,断代无声万籁轻。秦小玺、汉流瓴,悉然入目对辰瞑。清樽热泪浸淫久,长喟中华帝座灵。

《水调歌头 .军演》
岁月荏苒远,造化数苍茫;暖吹九栩清气、无绪也飞扬。解道炎黄有德、可奈金戈干戚,鬼斧乱华帮。万古一樽酒、风物尚徜徉。.
临五岳、梦如烟,话三皇。岚涛似雪、渭原大野恸江郎。极目莽边浩宇,睡稳春花时节;如意满庭芳。海廓龙初起、腾越震长疆。
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松云老人
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PostPosted: 2008-06-16 18:30:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

两首力作,拜读,欣赏!
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古埙
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PostPosted: 2008-06-17 14:43:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

岂敢,小古一拜。
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游向高原的鱼
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PostPosted: 2008-06-17 15:43:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢第一首,觉得形象更和谐。
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古埙
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PostPosted: 2008-06-23 19:28:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

:)
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暗香如沁
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PostPosted: 2008-07-01 19:25:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

两首俱佳,相比也更喜第一.
问好老师.
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