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青岛樱花两题

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Posted: 2008-06-08 15:01:17 Post subject: 青岛樱花两题

含苞骨朵小小,身子单薄凌波涉海而来她有微弱的呼吸粉红的心跳岛城大朵的阳光小朵的阳光令她胆怯迟迟不敢睁开眼睛她此时的体温比春天略低初绽一朵一朵地开悄悄地开这群初长成的粉衣女儿坐在三月的枝头彼此亲近,细语现出春天的小模样清晨,蝴蝶未醒蜜蜂未到她们的甜和香刚好让提着淡水走来的我轻轻嗅见 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2008-06-08 16:05:42 Post subject:

小巧，温馨。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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Posted: 2008-06-08 20:27:43 Post subject:

精小,多来.

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Posted: 2008-06-15 14:49:39 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

小巧，温馨。

谢谢高原的鱼支持.问好
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Posted: 2008-06-15 14:50:29 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

精小,多来.

谢谢赵老师评读.会常来学习.问好
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Posted: 2008-06-15 16:41:40 Post subject:

<含苞>写得轻巧可爱. <初绽>中,其实樱花既不结果,也无香味. _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2008-06-15 20:56:34 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

<含苞>写得轻巧可爱.

<初绽>中,其实樱花既不结果,也无香味.

谢谢司马老师评读.不知您说的是哪个品种.是的,很多樱花是无香的.但日本晚樱有淡淡的香甜味.淡淡的...有机会欢迎来青岛赏樱啊.问好. Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-06-15 21:07:06 Post subject:

她此时的体温比春天略低诗意盎然。

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Posted: 2008-06-24 13:57:13 Post subject:

[quote="舒展的波浪"]她此时的体温比春天略低诗意盎然。[/quote 谢谢舒展的波浪.问好 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

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Posted: 2008-06-25 17:57:41 Post subject:

这两首清新小巧,提上欣赏!

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Posted: 2008-06-25 23:20:11 Post subject:

谢谢明月.问好 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

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