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Posted: 2008-06-08 20:18:30 Post subject: 端午拜屈原

端午拜屈原司马策风何需粽子和苍蒲年年熏香我们的记忆从来都不用想起因为永远都不曾忘怀江边你乱发凌风思君忧民愁白了长发你仰天长啸向天问生死聚散可有期爱恨忠奸有谁明可是那只是永无回声的空谷你想招魂纳魄吧魂已随风被小人的口袋收走魄也霜冷被铁手监禁哑口不语你绝望的纵身一跃最后欲抓楚怀王甩手离去的背影可惜抓不住他左右摇摆的衣袖凄风呜咽紧紧揪住旋涡的心轻如白云你飘进了中华民族的血管里无论历史清浊沉浮你的名字长在人心的脉动中撞响华夏的胸腔今天仿佛又见到你高立青藏昆仑你登高思远抚剑水袖轻抛仰天长叹去国怀乡悲愤荡胸眼中澎湃出两道飞泻的激流离骚和天问冲出了一条长江一条黄河滋养了千年中华诗歌的土壤你满头的木兰坠露千年闪光根根都敲响山颠的旭日你萦怀的秋菊落英万里流芳缕缕都飘逸月下的香云 2008，6，4 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2008-06-08 20:22:49 Post subject:

永远的纪念！

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Posted: 2008-06-08 22:07:52 Post subject:

木易沉香 wrote:

永远的纪念！

感谢木易沉香兄关注阅评!
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Posted: 2008-06-09 13:36:31 Post subject:

再提 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2008-06-11 17:07:14 Post subject:

有缘人?! _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2008-06-11 19:17:03 Post subject: 问候司马

司马策风扬鞭,屈子汨萝河畔.离骚问天道哉! 端午节-----中国的诗人节.

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Posted: 2008-06-11 23:17:16 Post subject:

你绝望的纵身一跃最后欲抓楚怀王甩手离去的背影可惜那不是他左右摇摆的衣袖那是永不回头的浪花那是永不回头的浪花,这一句不要是否更有回味? _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

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Posted: 2008-06-13 16:41:04 Post subject: 感谢吟啸徐行兄

吟啸徐行 wrote:

你绝望的纵身一跃最后欲抓
...

感谢吟啸徐行兄耐心有心.你的提示很是有帮助.

的确这句在这里有多余不当之嫌.我试着改了改.你看看好不好?

司马拱手!
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Posted: 2008-06-13 17:38:49 Post subject:

何需粽子和苍蒲年年熏香我们的记忆从来都不用想起 .....怀念屈原,起笔切入不错,感觉后面的委婉些效果更好,个见,握手兄弟.

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Posted: 2008-06-13 18:05:28 Post subject:

感受字里行间的怀念忧思！ _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2008-06-13 18:19:16 Post subject:

见功底的诗歌。问好。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-06-14 23:33:22 Post subject:

朱煜国 wrote:

司马策风扬鞭,屈子汨萝河畔.离骚问天道哉!
端午节-----中国的诗人节.

感谢朱煜国兄光临留墨感言.

握手问候!
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Posted: 2008-06-14 23:40:15 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

何需粽子和苍蒲
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感谢赵福治兄来读.感谢您喜欢,感谢你提出富有建设性的意见.

的确有理,我现在试着将某些句子再做斟酌.
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Posted: 2008-06-15 16:48:07 Post subject:

晴宝儿 wrote:

感受字里行间的怀念忧思！

多谢晴宝儿兄也来阅读点评!

问候一声!
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Posted: 2008-06-15 20:45:28 Post subject:

凄风呜咽紧紧揪住旋涡的心赏读.问好司马老师. _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

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Posted: 2008-06-15 23:53:14 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

见功底的诗歌。问好。

多谢nobody兄阅读夸奖.远握!
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Posted: 2008-07-05 19:07:27 Post subject:

秀水 wrote:

凄风呜咽紧紧揪住旋涡的心

赏读.问好司马老师.

感谢秀水欣赏关注.
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Posted: 2009-05-29 08:37:20 Post subject:

再提旧作，端午为礼。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2009-05-30 02:56:22 Post subject:

深刻，激情，戏剧效果！

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深刻，激情，戏剧效果！

感谢苦海兄喜欢夸奖！
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