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《焚烧一个月的诗稿》
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PostPosted: 2008-06-13 18:19:17    Post subject: 《焚烧一个月的诗稿》 Reply with quote

《焚烧一个月的诗稿》
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PostPosted: 2008-06-13 18:25:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

精致。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-15 06:55:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢版主关注!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 10:59:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

提上欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-22 02:20:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

亲爱的爹娘
盛上满盔的酸辣豆花
撒上精细的芽菜末
在山头的夏风中
焚烧一个月的诗稿
看您细嚼慢咽鲜嫩的风味

欣赏
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PostPosted: 2008-06-22 20:49:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙漠好,谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-22 21:00:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

亲爱的爹娘
盛上满盔的酸辣豆花
撒上精细的芽菜末
在山头的夏风中
焚烧一个月的诗稿
看您细嚼慢咽鲜嫩的风味

很不错的诗歌。欣赏并学习。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-28 21:39:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水好,舒展的波浪好,感谢,问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-01 18:03:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

真挚细腻的情感 问好Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-07-01 20:27:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

情感浓烈 文笔轻灵 学习
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