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似此星辰非昨夜-七草

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Posted: 2008-06-10 09:17:08 Post subject: 似此星辰非昨夜-七草

似此星辰非昨夜旧时朱楼今挂雨，紫盖红花眼底桥。似此星辰非昨夜，为谁风露立中宵。新妆碎步移香舞，落木寒风滴泪招。倦晚思君蝴蝶梦，初魂散枕柳眉描。 08/05/11那天似此星辰非昨夜，为君风露立中宵-苏茉儿 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-06-10 13:48:16 Post subject:

盜兄，以此诗下酒，俺陪你浮一白，如何？ _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-06-10 15:57:21 Post subject:

呵呵，盗兄大概PREFER 美眉呢

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Posted: 2008-06-10 17:40:53 Post subject: 说定了！就此定下饮酒盟。

拈花微笑 wrote:

盗兄，以此诗下酒，俺陪你浮一白，如何？

Cool

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Posted: 2008-06-10 17:42:28 Post subject: 不是大概！是绝对～

绝无丝毫妥协的绝对。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-06-10 21:24:02 Post subject:

怎么说啦，怎么说啦，我还在等着蹭酒喝哪~~~ 还没哪？来询问~~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-06-10 21:48:33 Post subject:

【倦晚思君蝴蝶梦初魂枕散柳眉描】又见温庭筠

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Posted: 2008-06-11 05:45:57 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

绝无丝毫妥协的绝对。

我知道是绝对，不过是给你自己个坦白的机会

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Posted: 2008-06-11 05:46:52 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

怎么说啦，怎么说啦，我还在等着蹭酒喝哪~~~

还没哪？来询问~~~

我知道谁会闻酒而来~~

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Posted: 2008-06-11 17:15:57 Post subject: 枕散！

曲元奇 wrote:

【倦晚思君蝴蝶梦初魂枕散柳眉描】又见温庭筠

这样一个调换就成了形容词，有不同的况味。
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Posted: 2008-06-11 17:18:06 Post subject: 该订个日子的。

红袖添乱 wrote:

怎么说啦，怎么说啦，我还在等着蹭酒喝哪~~~

还没哪？来询问~~~

什么酒都可以哪？
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Posted: 2008-06-11 17:22:40 Post subject: 谢谢喔，原来机会是创造出来的！

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诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

绝无丝毫妥协的绝对。

我知道是绝对，不过是给你自己个坦白的机会

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Posted: 2008-06-11 20:54:16 Post subject:

绝对。就移（舞）字有点不合适。去喝酒，别忘了叫我~~ _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-06-12 09:15:46 Post subject: 谢有缘兄！（碎步）（舞）嫌重复了。

是有缘 wrote:

绝对。就移（舞）字有点不合适。

去喝酒，别忘了叫我~~

约个日子吧！
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Posted: 2008-06-13 06:57:51 Post subject:

看看，用了几个典，，，嘻嘻。。。昨儿想了一天，没整出一首，我再去想。问候诸位！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-06-19 03:36:13 Post subject:

很有意境的好诗!学习欣赏! 妙!!! _________________ 天边云一朵苍海粟一粒云儿朵朵随风飘粟儿粒粒满山崖

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Posted: 2008-06-19 09:48:23 Post subject: 想的也太久了！

苏茉儿 wrote:

看看，用了几个典，，，嘻嘻。。。
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Posted: 2008-06-19 09:53:08 Post subject: 谢谢！您也尝试砍一刀。

互相学习。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-06-25 06:42:55 Post subject:

似此星辰非昨夜，忽见熟人狂七草新政无能米半斗，旧诗有藏酒拦腰碎碎叨叨口自误，悠悠忽忽心飘摇不敢写诗观天文，快速回复不改稿坏了平仄怎么乔？问好，好不好？ _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2008-06-26 14:08:34 Post subject: 好！怎么乔怎么好。

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似此星辰非昨夜，忽见熟人狂七草
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