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该从那一段开始吟哦
鹤雨
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PostPosted: 2008-06-09 22:08:23    Post subject: 该从那一段开始吟哦 Reply with quote

该从那一段开始吟哦/鹤雨

(十四行诗初学)





夜的心脏有序的博动,

我的心脏有序的应和。

灯光泼洒得多么柔软,

爱的歌 ,该从那一段开始吟哦!



是谁在掀动夜的窗帘,

探着头殷勤的偷看。

如今的姑娘已成为昨日的姑娘,

隐秘的心事惧怕风声走漏。



生命的神奇如你高举的杯盏,

由你把握又将你灌醉,

至圣的爱情日渐蹉跎。



谁能接受这褪色的娇颜,

和永不退色金子般的心,

哦!甜蜜的人,每一个美丽的清晨都值得期盼。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-10 03:54:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

谁能接受这褪色的娇颜,

和永不退色金子般的心,
Very Happy Very Happy 欢迎鹤雨归队,期望多多评贴,热闹一下。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-10 06:33:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,谢谢大哥,有空小妹自当上来捧场!辛苦你们了!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-11 10:16:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎俏MM回来 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-06-11 15:08:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

每一个美丽的清晨都值得期盼.
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