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[b]遥遥的等待[/b]
gardenia
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PostPosted: 2008-06-05 05:33:40    Post subject: [b]遥遥的等待[/b] Reply with quote

遥遥的等待

时光流逝好远

胸中的创痕好深

可我依然

遥遥等待



不见了 往昔的笑顔

丢失了 冬季的雪花

在千山万水之外

在微寒的春风中

我凄凄的等待

遥遥的等待



不要问我

今夜梦里 是否

以泪洗面 是否

想你千万遍



大自然奉献于我

南国五彩的春天

冻结的情感 却

走不出那一个冬季

没有绿叶青草

冰冷的冬季



忘却你

又怎能不忆起

不忆起那个冬季

无人知晓的童话



无助的思念

流成河

流向你梦的海洋

无奈的牵挂

缀满晨光中

每一粒珠泪的晶莹



在远方

有我遥遥的等待
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-06-05 21:57:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

可婉转些表达.
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