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走过黄昏

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Posted: 2008-06-03 20:30:01 Post subject: 走过黄昏

细雨把最后的黄昏湿透黄昏和在灰暗的路泥从这里走过的人穿着各式各样的鞋把黄昏和泥巴带进不一样的家里

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Posted: 2008-06-03 21:13:03 Post subject:

不行，要换鞋~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-06-04 07:33:46 Post subject:

不行，要换鞋~~ zt _________________ 饮酒亦品茶食笋嚼菜根

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Posted: 2008-06-04 07:53:25 Post subject:

不行，要换鞋~~ zt

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Posted: 2008-06-04 21:50:13 Post subject:

谢谢大家都说换鞋也只好换鞋了

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Posted: 2008-06-05 05:46:11 Post subject:

很干净的泥! 第二节颇有韵味。 _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-06-05 09:30:32 Post subject:

簡短而鮮明，好作品。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-06-05 14:01:56 Post subject:

拈花微笑 wrote:

很干净的泥!

第二节颇有韵味。

嗯？？

解释解释？

我学习学习~~
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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-06-05 15:52:52 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

拈花微笑 wrote:

很干净的泥!

第二节颇有韵味。

嗯？？

解释解释？
...

嗯，容俺试解之。

第二节似乎表征了，同样的泥，会有不同的偶然际遇，遭逢不同的命运。。。。。。

所用的意象，＂路＂，＂行人＂，＂黄昏＂和＂泥＂，都是很有容量的意义载体。在手法上，以微现巨，以一喻多。很讨巧。
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Posted: 2008-06-05 21:05:27 Post subject:

不论怎么说都谢谢大家

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Posted: 2008-06-06 02:00:10 Post subject:

拈花微笑说得很好。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2008-06-07 20:27:10 Post subject:

谢谢，学习了。。。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-06-07 23:11:33 Post subject:

多谢大家赏读

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Posted: 2008-06-14 07:24:48 Post subject:

好诗,欣赏! _________________ 天边云一朵苍海粟一粒云儿朵朵随风飘粟儿粒粒满山崖

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