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亲人,我回来了
李伯庠
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PostPosted: 2008-05-31 00:24:55    Post subject: 亲人,我回来了 Reply with quote

标签:诗歌 起伏的心波 文化 分类:诗歌



作者:李伯庠



亲人,我回来了,

在云之南迷路的花香里苏醒,

在五羊城纷乱的人潮里转身,

北去,北去,

沪上的地铁太疾,

京都的风沙太烈,



亲人,我回来了,

在物欲的锁头下被优雅释放,

淡远了二十年的女子音,

你的身子长高了,

我踮起脚尖也亲你不到,



亲人,我回来了,

我的骨殖尚有余温,

埋在后院的木槿树下,

必定催开繁花满枝,



亲人啊亲人,我回来了,

我的衣领洁白,气息淡定,

为何你们的眼里,

却噙满忧伤的泪水?



2008年4月21日

2008年5月30日
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PostPosted: 2008-06-02 19:26:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

亲人,我回来了,

我的骨殖尚有余温,

埋在后院的木槿树下,

必定催开繁花满枝
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PostPosted: 2008-06-02 20:39:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

抒情味浓,语言流转.

结尾似乎仓促了些.个见.
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PostPosted: 2008-06-03 06:38:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢司马兄台指正。
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