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痛问与痛悼
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PostPosted: 2008-05-13 05:07:10    Post subject: 痛问与痛悼 Reply with quote
痛问与痛悼
文/ 山城子

下午2时28分
恶魔呀你为什么选择这个时间
全中国的中小学生都规矩在课堂里呀
悠忽中你将汶川及周围县市掀翻
一刹那的惊叫被你捂在水泥板桌椅之下
许多师生冥冥中成为永远

冥界的课堂是否依然活泼健康
那里的祖国是否依然生前的概念

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PostPosted: 2008-05-30 21:01:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好。已读过山城子老师的多首地震佳作。
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PostPosted: 2008-05-30 23:05:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢nobody！
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PostPosted: 2008-05-30 23:58:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
精练！
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PostPosted: 2008-06-01 04:38:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
捧心西子 wrote:
精练！


问好新朋友！
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PostPosted: 2008-06-01 06:35:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
冥界的课堂是否依然活泼健康
那里的祖国是否依然生前的概念
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PostPosted: 2008-06-11 22:16:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好白水！
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PostPosted: 2008-06-11 23:13:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
掀翻一词有分量,在哪儿多写一两句,效果或许会更好.
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PostPosted: 2008-06-13 00:46:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
吟啸徐行 wrote:
掀翻一词有分量,在哪儿多写一两句,效果或许会更好.


谢谢朋友指点——你说得很有道理，有时间再考虑添吧！。
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