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云南印象(一)
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PostPosted: 2008-05-25 21:41:11    Post subject: 云南印象(一) Reply with quote

大 烟 筒
以前在媒体上见过烟筒子,云贵两省的“双枪兵”蛮有意思。这次到彩云之南,看见真的了,而且全身体验,新鲜得紧。
阿蔡兄弟是个自来熟,我们在江城县建设戈兰滩水电站,前期培训;无事到后山溜达,哈尼族的朋友很热情,让我们入座,他们一壁喝酒一壁抽大烟筒,在昆明我见过三米长、二十公分口径的装饰富丽的烟筒,夜市中烟主半个脸几乎埋到里面,很陶醉的样子。
阿蔡让哈尼兄弟帮我们做两个,他们很爽快地答应。几天后我们拿到一只竹制的半米长、十公分的烟筒,很简单新竹掏空留底,十五公分高处弄个小洞插入小竹管,用铜片包出加水线。朴素无华,工区的外聘工手把手教我们使用:先灌水,不能超过加水线,小竹管口填入烟丝,松软适度;点燃后用嘴封住筒口吸气,一阵咕噜乱响,火星迸而狼烟起,涕泪交加而且咆哮喘气,大类卡通人物,拔了气门塞子直欲窜到天花板上面去,一个个呛得七窍冒烟。
云土其实有名,不久我们都成了一名优秀的哈尼烟枪手。和煦的阳光下,调匀气息,吐纳有致,水声悦耳平缓有梵呗之妙。看五色云彩悠然自得,聆仙江之语诉说无尽;云彩散了,我们的身心也随着轻烟融化在尽善尽美的大自然中。
三、戈兰滩云雾
彩云易散,霁月难逢;云雾是最华而不实的东西。来到云南,不能不说说云雾:随物赋形,停岚驻岭;出自云窝,来瞻林海;雨来如瀑,龙蛇起陆;风卷相战,古阵旗鼓。漏夜彤云簇月,残涤涣彩;清明阻道塞川,滚滚弄潮。停足似山僧止观面壁,漫舞乃虞姬飞魂夺魄。竹林闲步,七贤齐聚;山谷堆垛,陈抟高眠。寒秋瑟瑟,凝神静气;三春英华,五彩斑斓。
事物往往是虚实互衬的。山水是实,云雾为虚;精华之余绪,浑然细腻地装饰这个世界,象精彩的戏幕,一层层次第拉开往往能给人更多的惊喜和享受。光有山水是不够的,缺乏动感和生机。红楼梦开篇胡说:太平时节山壑里的云雾戾结,到了乱世,这些雾气溢出化成了象王莽、曹操等大奸恶之人,赤壁长江大雾,却很自然地把阿瞒的百万军队赶到火海中去,连毫毛都烧光了;如何是一家不识一家人呢。八卦阵里也是邪乎,愁云惨雾,诸葛先生“其状类妖”是铁定翻不了案的。
戈兰滩电站工地的云雾,幻化节奏沉稳有序,大气多姿,对即将廊道覆盖的坝基来说,无论如何是一种吉祥的昭示。能亲临工作和体验,实为大美。
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2008-05-26 13:27:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

感觉写云雾的那段语言太精炼了些,呵呵!
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古埙
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PostPosted: 2008-05-29 02:25:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,说笑了。
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2008-05-29 14:59:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

写作之前,在谋篇布局、立意写境方面思考不够。直言了。
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古埙
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PostPosted: 2008-05-29 19:07:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

片段耳。
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