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我有足够的耐心(二首)
宣城田斌
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PostPosted: 2008-05-11 15:13:29    Post subject: 我有足够的耐心(二首) Reply with quote

我有足够的耐心(二首)

田 斌

我有足够的耐心 等你
你来之前 我用不尽的思念
编织梦幻 低吟 爱
身陷其中 隐痛
像一把钢刀插入心间
我没有办法把你排除在心空之外
我在想象该送你点什么
手上戴的 或是耳鬓之间
问候信息一样容易编写
你的笑容电波一样传来
失眠之夜 被单轻薄
外面好冷 我的心
月光一样冰凉
有多少距离 需要填补
纵今生无缘 为来生
等你 我有不变的真情



桃花开

你又张开粉红的小嘴
勾引我的欲望
让我想起那晚的初恋
月光下一张娇羞的脸

节日一样 你穿着花袄
蹦蹦跳跳 风里闹
我宁愿活在童年的春光里
在你身边的守候

桃花开 你要出嫁
乡村的锁呐吹出你满脸泪花
站在村口的树荫下
眷恋的目光被拉得很痛很酸

桃花开 总唤醒我的思念
心爱的女人 我轻唤一声 桃花
如今我站在落暮的时光里
看你一瓣一瓣谢



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PostPosted: 2008-05-11 18:14:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

桃花开 总唤醒我的思念
心爱的女人 我轻唤一声 桃花
如今我站在落暮的时光里
看你一瓣一瓣谢

意境不错!
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-05-11 18:34:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

桃花开 总唤醒我的思念
心爱的女人 我轻唤一声 桃花
如今我站在落暮的时光里
看你一瓣一瓣谢
....这节有意境.
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-11 21:18:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

如今我站在落暮的时光里
看你一瓣一瓣谢
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