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我的书没有书号
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PostPosted: 2008-05-09 17:54:09    Post subject: 我的书没有书号 Reply with quote

我想在摩天楼顶
在最繁华街道
在每个人心壁
登条天大广告

我要潜入红楼梦
趁着门子睡觉
向雪芹讨一个
否则书无法发表

我要成为109将
水泊梁山吹响号角
不留下那字母数字
定叫你无路可逃

我想跨越水之湄
在《诗经》的清早
拽住硕鼠尾巴
向它讨个书号

可爱的淑女啊
你美丽窈窕
只是你没贴ISBN
那能到处逍遥

你还是呆在闺阁
不要四处招摇
旮旯的鼠洞
正好收藏你美貌

我已将春日花草
夏天雷电雨暴
秋之静美冬之肃穆
一起酿成文字甘醪

我已用昨日感悟
今日思考
对未来的企盼
将我书灌醉喂饱

儿时快乐的欢笑
青葱岁月烦恼
养家糊口的艰辛
我用纸张一一打包

只是无ISBN之脚
书安能行远登高
只能在日暮时分
悄悄借给黑夜传抄

只是没有通行证
书就成无翅鹊鹞
那时广袤蓝天啊
将飘满血淋淋泡泡

08-5-9于钓月小筑
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PostPosted: 2008-05-09 18:03:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

你还是呆在闺阁
不要四处招摇
旮旯的鼠洞
正好收藏你美貌


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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2008-05-10 00:05:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

思绪飘扬,诗语活泼。说得太满,张力不多。
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钓月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-10 15:43:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]你还是呆在闺阁
...[/quote]

若在国外的人,无法体会到这一点,书号成本竟然是印书成本多少倍,应该改一改,最近归队搞文学写作感到这是最令人感到别扭的,原来搞专业写作未感受到这一点,写一本出版一本......
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PostPosted: 2008-05-10 15:46:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="William Zhou周道模"]思绪飘扬,诗语活泼。说得太满,张力不多。[/quote]

个见,诗歌的美有多种,能有一、二种美能给人留下点印象就足够了。谢谢道模启发!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-10 15:50:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

真不理解这个世界上的艺术是怎么啦......唉!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-10 18:14:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

所以我们当年都弃文从工了。糊口要紧。
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PostPosted: 2008-05-10 21:59:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="nobody"]所以我们当年都弃文从工了。糊口要紧。[/quote]

理解你,生存第一啊,我呢,连像你这样选择的机会都没有, 我是七六年初中之后就进厂做了工人,高考恢复之后,以同等资格下班之后自学(事实上未上高中一天)考上了大学......糊口要紧啊,为了不走文科这路子,我去年叫女儿上了南大建筑设计专业!
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