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乘苇笛回乡

钓月
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Posted: 2008-05-06 23:04:39 Post subject: 乘苇笛回乡

折一根青青杨柳插入无边月光叠一只苇笛潇潇洒洒吹响扯起快乐心帆今夜乘苇笛回乡大运河畔的小村盐碱霸占着土壤工厂的污水废气合谋将庄稼埋葬为了养家糊口只好四处流浪跋涉在异乡泥径打开大脑天窗总是追随着母亲殷殷企盼的目光心中盛放的葵花永朝着家乡方向村口的老槐树是否记得我模样你枝上的鸟儿是否会把我原谅那几只鸟蛋至今还卡我曲肠桥西的小林子是否还跟我捉迷藏快出来吧，小林子今晚风清月朗我带了今世缘酒咱们举杯算个总账拎一串星星过重山迭嶂越扬子江，大运河携两袖花香回到了我家乡今夜看望我亲娘 08-5-6 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-05-06 23:47:32 Post subject:

拎一串星星过重山迭嶂越扬子江，大运河携两袖花香回到了我家乡今夜看望我亲娘很有想象~问好钓月!

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Posted: 2008-05-07 03:47:44 Post subject:

很顺口。 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2008-05-08 03:48:13 Post subject: 致沙漠

[quote="沙漠"]很顺口。[/quote] 谢谢你的鼓励! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-05-08 18:15:28 Post subject:

[quote="半溪明月"]拎一串星星 ...[/quote] 谢谢你的支持,问好 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-05-08 20:39:51 Post subject:

朗朗上口! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2008-05-08 21:33:24 Post subject:

有一种美就行了.谢谢你的鼓励!诗人是为美而生! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-05-09 05:39:55 Post subject:

立意不是很新，但清新明快，韵律和节奏均好。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-05-09 17:38:08 Post subject:

[quote="William Zhou周道模"]立意不是很新，但清新明快，韵律和节奏均好。[/quote] 谢谢.你眼光毒怪,说得很对,就是要化腐朽为神奇! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-05-10 18:40:27 Post subject:

清新之极。不得不赞。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-05-10 21:51:01 Post subject:

nobody朋友,你和我都应该是nobody,不要说"不得不赞",多指点!问好朋友!祝母亲节全家平安幸福! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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