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千秋岁*春景

田建勋
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Posted: 2008-05-08 05:39:00 Post subject: 千秋岁*春景

槐香初透，黄鸟歌池柳。百艳竞，千枝秀。轻烟笼碧岸，春色浓如酒。踏青去，莫教芳草清风候。紫燕飞来又，一别相思厚。惟梦里，人如旧。孤灯长夜冷，泪洒中宵后。对残月，情怀怎赋身空瘦。 08/05/08

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Posted: 2008-05-08 06:16:18 Post subject:

好词！欣赏。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-05-08 06:53:02 Post subject:

春色惹相思,梦里人如旧.问好. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-05-08 17:19:01 Post subject:

好词。好象几个字出律：斗、笼、教、影等。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

田建勋
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Posted: 2008-05-08 19:05:32 Post subject:

谢谢诸位的欣赏与指点,已改~

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