莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-08 00:22:55 Post subject: 捣练子—抒怀 |
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桃旧落,
絮新飞。
国色香浓随暖晖,
慵懒无诗留景醉,
劳心赋句费神思。 |
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松云老人 秀才
Joined: 11 Apr 2008 Posts: 376 Location: 中国 松云老人Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-08 01:04:05 Post subject: |
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这首词还是要加加工。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-08 15:32:13 Post subject: |
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谢谢松云关注! |
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戴永良 秀才
Joined: 28 Aug 2007 Posts: 194
戴永良Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-25 02:50:31 Post subject: |
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桃花真国色
无诗也自醉
芳心赋云碧
心思有人会 _________________ 真诚 友爱 善良 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-25 17:09:49 Post subject: |
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戴永良 wrote: |
桃花真国色
无诗也自醉
芳心赋云碧
心思有人会 |
谢谢关注! |
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