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灯的脚(外二首)
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PostPosted: 2008-05-06 20:47:32    Post subject: 灯的脚(外二首) Reply with quote

灯的脚

灯 坐在高处
它的脚伸过来
明亮亮的 晃眼

它不收足
我也不走动
我怕被它绊倒
跌进夜的蜜语

灯的脚 走进我的诗
隐隐可闻一股汗味
继而感觉
它提起我 一只沉重的鞋

收工

直起身子
收走一粒粒的汗水
暮色满地
风 作最后的清点

打搅一天了
让土地盖上月光和虫吟
睡一宿吧

田埂上 稻草蓬头叉腰
在你梦里
在我梦外

现在夜是一根鞭子

打开窗子 一阵风
吹走 我的下午

暮色 挤进书中
使一首诗有些陶醉
灯 想再端来一杯
但我找不到拉绳

从午睡中走来
徘徊在一张纸上
它的脚很认真

现在夜是一根鞭子
前所未有的赶我
赶我

草在哪
我连喊三声
就有一个草原
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PostPosted: 2008-05-06 21:35:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

草在哪
我连喊三声
就有一个草原

总体有些散
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PostPosted: 2008-05-06 23:41:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

草在哪
我连喊三声
就有一个草原


不错的句子~
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