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火龙(三十四,三十五)
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PostPosted: 2008-05-05 19:04:59    Post subject: 火龙(三十四,三十五) Reply with quote

(三十四)

太阳像走亲戚似的
把山坳坳刷了一遍又一遍
这个城市是按图的式样
剪出来的,每一条街道
都按到来的方向剪开

我期待已久的火龙啊
即将露面,四伏的白云
一片
低过了下一片。现在,我要把马蹄
压低,最好是
低过山峦的眼,如果可以
最好是低过太阳
刚刚抬起的额头

四伏的白云啊,我要把你举起
就像举起
喜庆的彩虹一样,举过山峦;
披金戴银的山峦啊,我要把你举起
就像举起龙的翅膀一样
轻盈,你是蓝天白云的乐队吗

只要我轻轻一挥
你这绸缎般柔韧的护火手啊
便随着豪华的四驾马车
翩然而降,连总理都要为你鼓掌
连总统都要为你喝彩啊

尊贵的穆沙拉夫总统陛下,他说:
“我希望我们最亲近的中国人民知道,
我们和你们站在一起,
支持你们举办这一辉煌的盛会。”

今天是4月16日,我手举火把
穿过巴基斯坦体育中心
就像穿过
心中的热血翻腾的太阳,那么灼热


(三十五)

这么多民族的人呀真够乱
这么多种方言就算我有一千张嘴
这么多的火车东倒西歪
而我
只有一只眼啊
只看到一匹大象
摇摇晃晃的
驮着
一个充血的太阳

我是那块喝醉了酒的石头吗
一直冲向恒河的石头啊
洗了三千多年还没洗净的石头
渐渐渐渐的
显露出粗犷的慧根

如果不是树,我为什么会点燃
朝天点燃的是流星啊
朝地点燃的是流荧
就让我做一把野草吧

今天,我一定要
迎着春风流泪
流尽了苦楚流出甘甜的热泪呀
就算我有一千只眼睛
我看也看不够

拉杰大街是辉煌的
起点是瑰丽的总统府
终点是恢弘壮丽的印度门

拉杰大街是笔直的
长度不到3公里的路段上
68名火炬手
一字排开

哗啦啦的彩旗呀
火焰中升腾的五星红旗
拉杰大街
洋溢着火热的友谊

拉杰大街啊
让全世界爱好和平的人们
手拉着手
做同一个梦,唱同一首歌
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PostPosted: 2008-05-05 19:38:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

妙想翩翩!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-05 20:52:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

虚实结合,联想丰富~问好岛!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-05 20:55:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

爱国之心人该有之。问好,岛。

装个QQ吧,说话方便!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-05 21:19:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

怎么没有33?
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PostPosted: 2008-05-05 21:42:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
怎么没有33?


有33呀
要读全,请看这个帖:

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=12509&start=15
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PostPosted: 2008-05-06 02:51:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

岛哥好棒呀!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-06 16:43:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

我期待已久的火龙啊
即将露面,四伏的白云
一片
低过了下一片。现在,我要把马蹄
压低,最好是
低过山峦的眼,如果可以
最好是低过
刚刚抬起的太阳的额 ...虚实转化结合很好.提读.
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PostPosted: 2008-05-07 18:05:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

我期待已久的火龙啊
即将露面

火龙都上珠穆朗玛峰了, 这条怎么还在山坳里 Rolling Eyes加油
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PostPosted: 2008-05-07 18:18:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵, 咱是笨龙, 慢慢飞
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PostPosted: 2008-05-07 21:07:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗意与现实结合得好!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-07 22:21:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

让全世界爱好和平的人们
手拉着手
做同一个梦,唱同一首歌

大气激情,好诗!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-22 06:22:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

奥运火炬已来江南,健儿们,准备好了吗?
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