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雪 是我的长途(外一首)
吟啸徐行
举人


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PostPosted: 2008-05-05 19:59:23    Post subject: 雪 是我的长途(外一首) Reply with quote

雪 是我的长途


风的手指 拨响了彤云
拨响了阴霾的天空
拨出
一朵朵雪花

占线吗 不要紧
多拨一会儿 准通
只要你还住在那座城市
还没有离开大地的家

我就能把骄傲拨到你的胸前
把快乐拨满你的脸
把我的吻拨进你的心

倘若有一天 我不在了
我一生一世的爱人
你能耐心地聆听
我从天国拨给你的每一朵雪花吗


出浴的油菜花


油菜花 刚刚出浴
穿一身薄薄的清香
站在春天的开头

阳光在前面谈笑
风在后边跳舞
油菜花踩紧大地
一步三摇 将我撂下
中间隔着一首蜂歌
牵动心的潮汐
卷起三月

三月就漂满农人的目光
被布谷催得
满地流淌
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-05-06 16:52:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

出浴的油菜花写得清新而婉约.
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沙漠
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PostPosted: 2008-05-07 03:57:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

我也喜欢《出浴的油菜花》!
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莞君
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PostPosted: 2008-05-07 05:32:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

写的漂亮 问候
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-07 17:22:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

后一首漂亮~欣赏!
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