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婚宴(组诗)
诗人行天
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PostPosted: 2008-04-30 20:39:10    Post subject: 婚宴(组诗) Reply with quote

婚 宴(组诗)
◎行天

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鲜嫩的微笑是新娘的唇色
一抹嫣红的界定
夜很软 在春的旋涡中
不断下陷 下陷
黎明前守望的孤岛
沉入清清水世界

席终 人散
明天拥被失眠
雪地上的红女孩
飘落街区已看不见

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两片陌生的岛屿
相互找到自己
同青涩的反叛
相偎相依

也曾知道
双子星的暗语
投入黑洞
弯曲的时钟
以蛋糕的脸
绽出礼花纷飞

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爱情扮上粉色
进入零点

一种坚守的誓言
镶上枫叶的花边
千纸鹤飞临
500米海水深蓝

记得雨中呢喃
随伞 随帆



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曾经心随步转
偶遇亮成语言
命运交叉的小径
传来远空的呼唤

海岸和海岸对话
轻轻扣问夏日艳蓝
眼里有重合的影子
却永远没有标准答案

在微笑对视中定都
让隔世情缘牵手纪元
过往的防线栖满了鸽群
心中的焰火只属于特别庆典
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 09:00:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

雪地上的红女孩
飘落街区已看不见

有故事性~节好,欢迎新朋友~
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钓月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 16:07:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

在微笑对视中定都
让隔世情缘牵手纪元
新颖,问好朋友!
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是有缘
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Joined: 08 Feb 2008
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 19:14:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

顶个
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蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情
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诗人行天
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Joined: 16 Apr 2008
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PostPosted: 2008-05-05 09:17:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好半溪明月、钓月、是有缘三位朋友,谢读评!
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