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着了魔的校园
钓月
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PostPosted: 2008-04-30 16:20:14    Post subject: 着了魔的校园 Reply with quote

清晨, 当我倒走着
退进一扇斑驳的校门
欣然看到茵茵操场
又添一排排新坟
星月在惬意地舞蹈
欢声飞扬,笑语喧腾
一颗颗变质的童心
脱逃出攘攘红尘

一具贴在黑板上的骷髅
兴高采烈在教书育人
抡动着千斤大锤
敲打着光滑的脑门
将一根根知识的坐标
夯进人生一节节行程
然后爬进腐朽的棺椁
静待着死亡的黄昏

只要有人答对什么
刹时一片伤心的哭声
无头无手的影子
摇头晃脑地吟诗诵文
一阵风倏然吹过
分数在排兵布阵
一位学生在练习穿墙
一个学生在雨中飞奔

一株株倒长的桃李
长得蓬勃茂盛
根根细瘦的根须
向着虚无处攀升
虽然枯涩乏味
纵然累累瘢痕
五彩缤纷的果实
却挂满了树的腰身

着了魔的校园
饮鸠者的佳饮奇珍
一阵柔风低语而过
却无力放飞风筝
倒长着的树木
只栖会考试的鸟儿
一只鼠在傍晚窜过
睹此情景也黯然销魂

08-1-24
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-04-30 18:40:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

别具的视角,问好.
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PostPosted: 2008-04-30 22:30:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="赵福治"]别具的视角,问好.[/quote]

谢谢赵老师光临鼓励! 问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 08:45:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

一株株倒长的桃李
长得蓬勃茂盛
根根细瘦的根须
向着虚无处攀升
虽然枯涩乏味
纵然累累瘢痕
五彩缤纷的果实
却挂满了树的腰身


异幻,有现实意义~节好!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 16:24:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

着了魔啊,当然不正常,问好远握 谢谢朋友鼓励!
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