黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-29 16:04:25 Post subject: 七绝 春雨 |
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七绝 春雨
淅淅好雨润苍苔
草色一新不染埃
小笋欣欣争破土
繁花野径竞相开 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-29 17:36:11 Post subject: |
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| 春雨滋润催生了万物。 |
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郑达夫 秀才

Joined: 29 Oct 2007 Posts: 734 Location: 福建永春仙夾園德樓 362604 郑达夫Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-29 19:50:37 Post subject: |
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淅淅好雨润苍苔
草色一新不染埃
欣赏~~问候先生~~ _________________ 我的新浪博客:
http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595
我的QQ: 450895168
我的地址:福建永春仙夾園德樓(362604) 鄭逹夫 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-01 08:26:52 Post subject: |
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谢谢莹雪达夫赏评。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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松云老人 秀才
Joined: 11 Apr 2008 Posts: 376 Location: 中国 松云老人Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-01 14:07:33 Post subject: |
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| 草色句孤平,其余好。 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-01 15:41:38 Post subject: |
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这个春景描写得好。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-02 04:06:45 Post subject: |
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谢松云兄指点,谢有缘兄评阅。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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