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一片、一片的江南

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Posted: 2008-04-28 17:17:08 Post subject: 一片、一片的江南

又回到梦中的江南你走在雨中的小巷撑一把过了时的油纸伞把背影留给了一个春天自由的脚步走出了江南的一片天山与水的眷恋从此变成了刀也割不断的思念天涯的路修不完前世不足的缘飘来的春风吹来了白云的笑脸却无法把星际的距离缩短精神的放纵把昨天的苦酒变成了今天的鸦片醉后的梦乡分享着眼泪的甘甜弥漫着歌声的晚风没有带来江南的丝竹管弦远远地目送擦着夕阳而去的归雁异域的夜晚把月光紧紧地依恋满目的清辉清澈着一双模糊的双眼

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Posted: 2008-04-28 17:30:50 Post subject:

这江南也生病了？这江南是江楼月恰似的对象？哈～ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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春天，疾病容易流行。等悠子好了，跟着大家也就大概没事了。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-04-28 17:36:20 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

这江南也生病了？这江南是江楼月恰似的对象？哈～

等茉儿的江楼月隐去

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Posted: 2008-04-28 17:39:32 Post subject: 那简单！用力给他挤兑挤兑～

是有缘 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

这江南也生病了？这江南是江楼月恰似的对象？哈～

等茉儿的江楼月隐去

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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-28 19:07:15 Post subject:

；这江南也生病了；诗盗兄江北也生病了

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Posted: 2008-04-28 19:26:53 Post subject: 从这些个面向去观察。

曲元奇 wrote:

；这江南也生病了；诗盗兄江北也生病了

1-浮现病原、病因。
2-测试宿主抵抗力。
3-测试药方子疗效。

凡事别过了头都不应该看作是坏事，能够控制住，再就是能够考量对下一代的影响程度。能做至此，已属难得。
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Posted: 2008-04-29 05:44:04 Post subject: 呀，谢有缘惦记。快了

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春天，疾病容易流行。等悠子好了，跟着大家也就大概没事了。

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Posted: 2008-04-29 07:02:54 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

曲元奇 wrote:

；这江南也生病了；诗盗兄江北也生病了

1-浮现病原、病因。
...

骂人是吧，俺可不怕你，哼、横！
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Posted: 2008-04-29 07:37:52 Post subject: 也没见过你怕谁呀～

苏茉儿 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

曲元奇 wrote:

；这江南也生病了；诗盗兄江北也生病了

1-浮现病原、病因。
...

骂人是吧，俺可不怕你，哼、横！

啥呀？这是情势分析呢！
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