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【春天疯了】

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-04-26 02:58:28 Post subject: 【春天疯了】

【春天疯了】敛起花朵的翅膀我们在枝间挂出投降的子桃葱绿的婚床,一路铺向天尽头草根处,露水悄悄聚集苦艾蒿,刺蓟草,旱芦苇多少温情和欢欣,才脱掉沟渠处的尖利和青涩而此刻,野地里的小狗狂吠,撒欢追赶蝴蝶枇杷叶,翘起楚楚莲花指天,那么大一扇鼓面她怎能擂得咚咚响呵,春天在我们眼里是不是都疯了?爱人

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Posted: 2008-04-26 04:55:01 Post subject:

呵,春天在我们眼里是不是都疯了?爱人问好！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

樱花听雨
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Posted: 2008-04-26 05:39:52 Post subject:

一幅声情并茂春天的图画~~~~ _________________ 樱花听雨搜狐博客樱花听雨新浪博客

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-04-26 15:59:01 Post subject:

又泄露了自己的爱情细节：自己和“爱人”带着小狗上山郊游，有美景就有美好的情感，就有浪漫的故事，所以“春天都疯了”。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-04-26 22:37:51 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

呵,春天在我们眼里
是不是都疯了?爱人

问好！

问好山城子老师～春安！

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Posted: 2008-04-26 22:40:04 Post subject:

樱花听雨 wrote:

一幅声情并茂春天的图画~~~~

呵呵，我鼻子闻到了你头发的香波味了～问好樱花！

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Posted: 2008-04-26 22:50:39 Post subject: 　

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

又泄露了自己的爱情细节：自己和“爱人”带着小狗上山郊游，有美景就有美好的情感，就有浪漫的故事，所以“春天都疯了”。

呵呵，这个差不多，不过没带小狗，是遇到了两条大狗，对我们狂吠，站在山上一座房子见的路上，我猜想狗应该是拴着的，就慢慢往前靠，老公站住不让过去，说小心是疯狗．没等我走过去，狗就跑到屋子里了．我一看，没拴绳，就不敢往前走了． Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-04-27 01:51:26 Post subject:

春天也会疯的　　呵　问好

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Posted: 2008-04-27 14:01:36 Post subject:

月亮, 你最近诗如泉涌啊. 我最近实在太忙, 又想把积在脑子里的东西趁周末打一点出来. 没顾上浇花, 见谅.

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Posted: 2008-04-28 06:30:51 Post subject:

呵呵，保重啊，别太累了～希望看到你的新诗！远握～

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Posted: 2008-04-28 06:35:00 Post subject:

关注春天!! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2008-04-29 05:16:58 Post subject:

呵,春天在我们眼里是不是都疯了?爱人 ——因为有铺垫，点得好

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Posted: 2008-04-29 06:32:04 Post subject:

溪语 wrote:

关注春天!!

问好溪语～

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Posted: 2008-04-29 06:57:33 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

呵,春天在我们眼里
是不是都疯了?爱人
——因为有铺垫，点得好

问好荷梦～

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Posted: 2008-04-29 21:01:10 Post subject:

从容纯熟之作。从诗歌里，也总能看到经久磨练的果效，跟其他一样。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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