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拍水

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Posted: 2008-04-27 16:10:09 Post subject: 拍水

褴褛少年 岁月青葱 临池塘之湄 对碧水一泓 气御云霓三千丈 练拍水神功  挥手开曙色 叱声惊飞鸿 举臂搅暮云 羞色乱穹窿 掌落琼苞绽 天地万树荣  添夏日清凉 熔冬时冰冻 生春天蕙风 点秋季霜红 不论三伏四九 池中波兴浪涌  镜花水月梦 转眼成空 水塘非金樽 岂能迷醉其中 回首来时径 处处青冢  08-4-10于钓月小筑 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-04-27 19:47:53 Post subject:

如此拍水,真用功了 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2008-04-27 21:50:23 Post subject:

[quote="hepingdao"]如此拍水,真用功了[/quote] 确曾练过少林这种拍水功. 有点夸张了,谢谢光临! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-04-27 23:15:26 Post subject: 还真练过呀,服你了

厉害 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2008-04-28 05:37:57 Post subject:

答hepingdao 你这个岛主才真正厉害! 现在诗坛又现春秋战国时的乱象,你却在这儿做起小国之君了, 我这是投你门下做一个食客的,不知肯不肯收纳? _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-04-28 06:08:05 Post subject:

功夫了得～问好钓月～

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Posted: 2008-04-28 15:26:26 Post subject:

[quote="半溪明月"]功夫了得～问好钓月～[/quote] 谢谢! 羡慕你的"乱弹"功夫了得! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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