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点绛唇—雨后北塔

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-04-25 18:53:56 Post subject: 点绛唇—雨后北塔

雨怕春归，护花特令微寒至。休书怨意，翠柳凌波戏。塔映霞辉，似诉三燕事。清幽地，追思旧迹，倍感灵杰气。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-04-26 06:38:23 Post subject:

身在三燕地，时有诗情至。问好。插图塔影何在？ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-04-26 18:12:44 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

身在三燕地，时有诗情至。问好。

插图塔影何在？

谢谢黄老点评！问好
只是随便搜了张图片，目前没有塔的图片。

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2008-04-26 20:53:46 Post subject:

和莹雪《点绛唇春归》雨带春归，犹寒欲夏谁将至？蝶来蜂去，日日枝头戏。夕拾朝花，残照流风事。幽幽里，一杯行迹，看烛还生气！乱写，待改。下面是莹雪的原词雨怕春归，护花特令微寒至。休书怨意，翠柳凌波戏。塔映霞辉，似诉三燕事。清幽地，追思旧迹，倍感灵杰气。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-04-27 15:00:17 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

和莹雪《点绛唇春归》
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谢谢鱼兄！问好

又一方天
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Posted: 2008-04-27 16:08:01 Post subject:

追思旧迹，倍感灵杰气。 ----是有灵气扑面来. 问好雪! _________________ 空钩久垂钓得烟波月醉

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-04-27 19:18:59 Post subject:

又一方天 wrote:

追思旧迹，
倍感灵杰气。
----是有灵气扑面来.
问好雪!

谢谢点评！
问好。呵呵，在这没几个人这么称呼“雪”听起来好怪的 Rolling Eyes

请您还是直呼莹雪吧！

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