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好久没来,发三首
玩偶
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PostPosted: 2008-04-25 17:45:36    Post subject: 好久没来,发三首 Reply with quote

桃花令

---小玉生日,戏做一首

敲你的窗,或许,有人探头说:
“摸着香,我也能走出去”
我看见眼底的那缕真相。桃花阵里全是牡丹
富贵逼人,住大把妖精,发酒疯
说醉话,魂不守舍


患洁痞的病人,失去赖以生存的
折腾,有一搭,没一搭的凡俗让人怀念
你眼神忧郁,面色洁净
隐忍是无话可说的那点颜色
跑不动的那份安静,压低的嗓音




白日梦

-----送给小草

骑白马的汉子坐在梦里
头上是来往的浮云,极像盛开的花朵
不交头接耳,也能说出秘密

他不知道过了河,是否
就意味着无法回头
水的阴柔早已绞断了时间的触须
能做的就是再犯一次桃花
明白着糊涂,言听计从风的暗语

汉子走过虚掩的门
镜子里的光撬开他的眼睛
“我们一起去流浪,打发剩下的时间?”
谁知这次是不是又在胡说,无法左右的耐性
全是伪装,正定的手足无措




空城计

始终无法用技艺影响故事的结局
这让人感到愤怒
对于无奈,我们的表情几乎一样
满不在乎却又满面狐疑,仿佛
门敞开着却又堵满秘密
里面坐的全是客人
喝茶。抽烟。高谈阔论。从一付牌走进下付牌
或者抬腿走出指尖上的风景
想起来,这真让人伤感
荡着笑声的空城,每块砖上都刻有名字
我却找不到自己的姓氏
难道为了哪些阴影我就该记恨他们
掠过的一阵风让人忘记了眼前的难题
我死后或许也会像它那样,从头顶沉静地刮过
面无表情,不叫暂停
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-04-25 21:08:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

我看见眼底的那缕真相。桃花阵里全是牡丹
富贵逼人,住大把妖精,发酒疯
说醉话,魂不守舍
.........思绪随心.
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-04-26 04:54:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

我死后或许也会像它那样,从头顶沉静地刮过
面无表情,不叫暂停

感觉不错的两首~问好!
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韩少君
进士出身


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PostPosted: 2008-07-01 11:55:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345
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玩偶
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PostPosted: 2008-07-02 03:12:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
我死后或许也会像它那样,从头顶沉静地刮过
...


谢谢,请多指点:)
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玩偶
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PostPosted: 2008-07-02 03:12:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
欣赏


请韩兄多指点,感谢:)
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