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淋雨
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PostPosted: 2008-04-21 23:46:55    Post subject: 淋雨 Reply with quote

我站在雨里让雨林我
我不知道禾苗野草是怎样焦渴
我直想把我淋透
淋成雨点
淋成泪珠

我要去哭一棵枯树
在我的雨泪中
让它张出满身蘑菇
这些黄色的软软的小手
会把我的断肠紧紧抓住
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-04-22 05:00:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活上的确会出现这样子的情绪,让雨淋透的欲望满涨。
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苏茉儿
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PostPosted: 2008-04-22 17:17:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

昨天傍晚下了第一长春雨,我也真的去淋了一下,只为这久久而来的春天。那种感觉
实在不能用语言来表达。沁心凉凉的,一直凉到心底,却幽幽。
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曲元奇
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PostPosted: 2008-04-22 19:44:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢
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红袖添乱
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PostPosted: 2008-04-23 08:09:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈~~很喜欢第二段~~

您的眼泪在枯树前,还真有些用了哪~~~~

哭它个一树嫩芽如何~~~?
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PostPosted: 2008-04-23 21:22:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢
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悠子
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PostPosted: 2008-04-24 14:47:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

有的时候也可以开心的让雨淋透
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