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给青葱岁月的他

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Posted: 2008-04-22 06:58:01 Post subject: 给青葱岁月的他

如果可以，如果可以我有一个小小的请求请你记住那年四月的温柔。还有那一簇笑破的桃花那一只舞丢的蝶袖啦啦啦啦啦~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 清凉的溪水流过我的脚趾清凉的溪水流过你的眼眸。那年你提着我的小布鞋随我在小溪撩着落红走。如果可以，如果可以我有一个小小的请求请你记住我浅浅的笑容。还有我们哼过的歌我们做过的梦啦啦啦啦啦~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 旧日的老歌不在飞出你的窗口旧日的老歌仍然落在我的心头在我最怀念你的时候握不住烟花灿烂的昔日的手 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-04-22 08:01:22 Post subject:

窗外、旧情、心语，黄昏、老歌、吉他。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-22 17:16:32 Post subject:

如歌！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-04-22 20:08:40 Post subject:

''旧日的老歌不[再]在飞出你的窗口旧日的老歌仍然落在我的心头''这种对怀旧的表现手法第一次读到

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Posted: 2008-04-22 20:21:48 Post subject:

望海潮---心潮---海潮--都是不可测的海底--神话在海底没有发芽

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Posted: 2008-04-22 20:28:46 Post subject:

对不起应该是回复给[望海潮]不小心网页变了

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Posted: 2008-04-22 22:01:23 Post subject:

末节象听一首老歌. When I was young I listen to the radio waiting for my farorite song....... _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-04-23 07:55:54 Post subject:

是有缘 wrote:

末节象听一首老歌.
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青葱岁月，是百坛的一个活动。我乱参加一把
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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-04-23 07:58:07 Post subject:

苏茉儿 wrote:

如歌！

无意无言把它谱成歌了，~去看看？
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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-04-23 08:53:54 Post subject:

真的，在哪儿啊，我赶紧去看看。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-04-23 09:38:10 Post subject:

当然在他玻壳 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-04-24 14:51:29 Post subject:

如歌(ZT)!

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Posted: 2008-04-29 17:12:53 Post subject:

记住那年四月的温柔... _________________ 瞠目结舌

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