是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-04-10 20:18:46 Post subject: (独领风骚-四月的轻唱) |
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四月的美丽
在枝头尽情地开放
天空的云
抖落着一张逮不到鱼的丝网
风多情地
把蝴蝶的身影飘在蓝天上
拽紧着一根绳
却放飞着自由的梦想
柳絮在风中纷纷扬扬
写不完的诗却装不满春天的愁肠
不很新鲜的季节
落红把伤感的故事讲了又讲
还是那银色的月光
依旧照着水中的脸庞
还是那过路的春风
摇碎了一个完整的镜象
青莲的小舟迷醉在水底的明月
至今没有返航
那清澈的河水
好象还残留着远古的愁怅
浪漫的四月
在遥远的岸边歌唱
绿草青青 白雾茫茫
有位佳人 在水一方 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-10 20:42:11 Post subject: |
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美丽的四月轻轻唱,有缘兄天性浪漫。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-11 03:48:50 Post subject: 有缘兄是否要将这首加入四月的:目录! |
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这才对哪!之前敲的字不见了?
_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-11 08:33:56 Post subject: |
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春天的目录 |
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苏茉儿 秀才
Joined: 31 Dec 2007 Posts: 739
苏茉儿Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-11 13:12:49 Post subject: |
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很漂亮,那佳人应该更漂亮 _________________ 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-04-13 19:48:24 Post subject: |
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浪,漫过了的蹄 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-13 19:49:26 Post subject: |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
这才对哪!之前敲的字不见了?
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也浪漫? |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-13 19:51:27 Post subject: |
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跟春的脚步,欣赏一路的芳香 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-04-13 19:53:54 Post subject: |
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苏茉儿 wrote: |
很漂亮,那佳人应该更漂亮 |
太远,模模糊糊,不知道是不是。梦里看不真切。 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-13 20:00:19 Post subject: 怎么加? |
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有什么要求吗? |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-14 21:28:51 Post subject: 您愿意即可! |
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稍晚帮您加上。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-04-16 16:33:11 Post subject: |
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谢谢诗道。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-16 21:38:25 Post subject: 有緣兄真是客氣! |
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_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-21 23:55:57 Post subject: |
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是写到这境界 我望尘莫及 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-04-22 22:11:00 Post subject: |
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谢谢来读。大家努力,同学同进。 |
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红袖添乱 秀才
Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-23 07:59:35 Post subject: |
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确实温柔 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-04-23 16:05:09 Post subject: |
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低头
记忆中的微笑
仍如玫瑰般的娇羞 |
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