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青苹果手记
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 09:33:47    Post subject: 青苹果手记 Reply with quote
梦在指尖上醒来
你躺在我的诗行里，若隐若现

空气中，那只苹果依然散发着清香
绿得让人心疼

星期五的太阳嵌入骨髓，喊声似潮水
从身体的最深处涌出
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 11:54:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
喝点苹果粥Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 15:13:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
虫二
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PostPosted: 2008-04-19 22:21:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
苹果吃多了会反胃！
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PostPosted: 2008-04-20 16:11:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
写得好象有点散。是不是要追求什么特殊的东西啊？
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PostPosted: 2008-04-21 14:21:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
嗯，跟有缘兄的感觉相似，没读懂。笑兄好！
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