悠子
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Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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 Posted: 2008-04-17 05:19:46 Post subject: 梦的船 |
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一粒黑暗里的红豆
跌落
在梦的背后
悄悄开出
一树千古的因果
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我不愿
做一朵听雨的残荷
用清恬的外壳
包裹苦涩
请允许
我百花编织的痴情
开放在你的紫陌
不为解脱
只为我已厌倦了曲终人散的寂寞
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泼十分的水墨
抹不去
红尘的斑驳
梦的船
总是停泊在似曾相识的柳岸
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詩盜喜裸評
进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 2984
Location: 台湾，台北
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| Posted: 2008-04-17 09:35:56 Post subject: |
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在似曾相识的柳岸，在梦的背后
一树千古的因果，跌落
红尘斑驳，一朵听雨残荷，跌落
不为解脱，不愿编织痴情
总是停泊
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可情可理，去捧就真 |
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红袖添乱
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Joined: 09 Jan 2008
Posts: 778
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| Posted: 2008-04-17 12:44:55 Post subject: |
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嗯~~你不愿做， 我来作~~那残荷~~
我愿是那夏末的残荷，
给恋人最后一个枯槁的飘逸
轰然倒下
留给他眷恋的一瞥
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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
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啥么
秀才
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| Posted: 2008-04-17 13:17:43 Post subject: |
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误入荷塘深处
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这有点麻烦 |
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拈花微笑
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Posts: 311
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| Posted: 2008-04-17 15:55:00 Post subject: |
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留得残荷听雨声，让俺也做残荷吧。。。
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瞠目结舌 |
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是有缘
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Joined: 08 Feb 2008
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| Posted: 2008-04-17 19:22:03 Post subject: |
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昨日短短的路
留下数不尽的情
今天的眼光
又从那里过
大海
仍在回荡着一个味
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蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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飞狐
童生
Joined: 26 Mar 2008
Posts: 22
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| Posted: 2008-04-18 04:57:54 Post subject: |
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品位你诗中意境
想象你写诗时情景
寂静 |
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悠子
举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-04-18 04:58:53 Post subject: 和你一倒下 |
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| 红袖添乱 wrote: |
嗯~~你不愿做， 我来作~~那残荷~~
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悠子
举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-04-18 04:59:37 Post subject: 咋进来的？ |
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悠子
举人
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Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-04-18 05:01:50 Post subject: 嘻， 你也误入荷塘深处~~ |
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| 拈花微笑 wrote: |
| 留得残荷听雨声，让俺也做残荷吧。。。 |
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悠子
举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-04-18 05:06:31 Post subject: |
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| 詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
在似曾相识的柳岸，在梦的背后
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千古因果，
红尘斑驳，
听雨残荷，
总是停泊。
阿弥陀佛？ |
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悠子
举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-04-18 05:10:54 Post subject: 你却跑到海边去聊 |
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悠子
举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-04-18 05:12:59 Post subject: 嗯，不要入定~~ |
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| 飞狐 wrote: |
品位你诗中意境
想象你写诗时情景
寂静 |
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曲元奇
秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008
Posts: 427
Location: 山东
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| Posted: 2008-04-19 19:36:43 Post subject: |
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| 在梦的背后开出千古因果 只这一句就统领了全诗 |
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一月
童生
Joined: 06 Apr 2008
Posts: 8
Location: USA
一月Collection |
| Posted: 2008-04-20 14:23:41 Post subject: |
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| 有一张旧船票， 能否登上你的梦的船？ |
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是有缘
秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008
Posts: 741
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| Posted: 2008-04-20 16:08:29 Post subject: |
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没有啊，那不过是脑海。 |
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悠子
举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-04-20 16:46:58 Post subject: 嗯，一个故事。问好曲曲 |
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| 曲元奇 wrote: |
| 在梦的背后开出千古因果 只这一句就统领了全诗 |
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悠子
举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-04-20 16:49:53 Post subject: 心路，脑海。。。偶笨 |
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悠子
举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-04-20 16:50:52 Post subject: 旧船票, 梦的船....很诗意的 |
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| 一月 wrote: |
| 有一张旧船票， 能否登上你的梦的船？ |
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苏茉儿
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Joined: 31 Dec 2007
Posts: 739
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| Posted: 2008-04-21 14:28:39 Post subject: |
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请悠子放我上船。。。
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