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练拳的晚上
钓月
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PostPosted: 2008-04-20 03:11:12    Post subject: 练拳的晚上 Reply with quote

今晚月色苍茫
天空云淡星朗
三、五点萤火
点亮荷花清香
七、八声狗吠
拱卫着村庄

神神秘秘
欣欣若狂
施展凌波微步
掠过风涛夜浪
潇潇洒洒
飞落村前大场

黑虎掏心
凶狠狠摘心取脏
武松脱铐
剪天罗地网
旋风腿
踢天罡

指点处
射天狼
拳打时
万钧霹雳响
猛挥掌
劈断千仞岗

师傅每个姿势
深藏万象
徒弟欲登堂入室
得先扳腿站桩
拳飞掌扬
人来影往

夜晚练拳
避火秃秃太阳
一位中年拳师
一群少年儿郎
练拳的人们
窃取着黑暗能量
08-4-6

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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-04-20 03:13:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,这拳练得霍霍生风~
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钓月
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PostPosted: 2008-04-20 03:30:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

确实练过,不过夸张了不少,谢谢你
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