zhangmin
秀才
Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 450
Location: 中国.江苏.张家港
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 Posted: 2008-04-18 17:38:03 Post subject: 怀念上一个四月 |
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多雨的季节，眼睛在窗前
不愿离开。歌声把我带进了
流星涌动的记忆，梦中的麦苗
跟现实一样茁壮成长
屋檐下，候鸟的羽翼
跟我的发丝，一样虔诚
把漫天相思揉碎。冰淇淋
提前在少女的嘴里，享受柔情
嘲笑着奶奶的担心与嫉妒
满目的桃花，一夜间
腮红泛白，我托起欲滴的泪光
让飞车带走。黄昏是脚步
最奢侈的地方，也是
诗人洗笔的圣地
中国.江苏.张敏 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-04-19 04:32:35 Post subject: |
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| 文笔不错, 希望多与大家交流. 问好 |
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莞君
秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007
Posts: 561
Location: 中国 陕西
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| Posted: 2008-04-19 16:02:55 Post subject: |
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干净 透明的语言 问好
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2008-04-19 18:07:15 Post subject: |
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| 轻盈的一首.问好. |
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zhangmin
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Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 450
Location: 中国.江苏.张家港
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谢谢白水，谢谢莞君，谢谢赵福治，远握。
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风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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