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买双草鞋走羊城
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PostPosted: 2008-02-20 07:06:14    Post subject: 买双草鞋走羊城 Reply with quote

在广东这块热土上,生活节奏之快,让我们这些外地来的打工仔也失去了多少消闲时光。其它国营企业早就实现了双休日,我们依然守着每个月两天的假期。
我谋生的公司办公大楼,不正在羊城,而在市外的一个小镇,每次进城,必定要买一点特别的东西,以示纪念。这次和同事文君同逛,我们的目光同时被鞋柜上的那些草鞋吸引过去。
这是一些用普通的麦草,剑麻等干草经过防虫防腐加工处理后缝制而成的草鞋,工艺讲究而精致。从黄褐,黄白,青蓝,纯白等五颜六色中,从直纹,网纹,扭麻花纹等图案中,散发出一股淡淡的田园清香。这馨香的气息,一下子勾起我的乡村情结来。
小时侯上学,村校在离家五里的烂泥池,一遇风雨,便满地滑溜,不管有无泥泞,我们的小脚踩上去,便从高高的坡上滑下,有时把握不住身体的平衡,就前赴后继身不由己了。
迫切需要一双鞋。买胶鞋是可望而不可及的,父亲那时是民办教师,一个月工资少得可怜,又还要替几个没法交学费的学生垫交学钱,母亲在生产队饲养耕牛,一天也挣不了几个工分,年底不因为一大家人而上交“缺粮钱”就算不错了。
好在我很听话,从来不吵着要。好在那时爷爷编得一手好草鞋,方圆几十里的父老乡亲都穿了爷爷的草鞋,走弯曲如人生的山前小径。
终于,在昏黄的煤油灯下,爷爷推开一摊子的草鞋,决定优先考虑为他那时唯一上学的孙子编一双草鞋。
也不知道抽了几袋叶子烟,细细的稻草柔柔地游走,爷爷编织了他生命中的最后一双草鞋。为给生产队追回一头逃窜的牛,爷爷被牛拉下了悬崖,不再回来。
从此我对草鞋就有了一种浓厚的感情.草鞋,是我小小的脚,印在大地上的人生符号。对爷爷,是句号。对于我,是冒号和省略号。
这是我人生的第一双草鞋,原以为再也无缘相见。却不曾想穿着新款皮鞋浪迹异地他乡时,又会有草鞋闯进我的生活!
没有理由不买一双。我们用能买一双中档皮鞋的代价,买回了我们的草鞋。
虽是秋天,羊城依然居高温不下。每次我和文君穿着草鞋走访羊城,总觉得是踏在故乡遥遥的田野。眼前恍惚就有了乡村特有的透明的阳光,田边地头的干草和麦秸,和爷爷指缝间漏下的不息的泥土!
1995年9月于广州
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PostPosted: 2008-02-20 16:08:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

好散文!祝贺!人、事、景、情,时空变幻和组合均佳。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-21 19:30:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,发现一错字。乡村情节——乡村情结?
注意到了,这是十多年前写的呢!厉害!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-21 22:07:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
好散文!祝贺!人、事、景、情,时空变幻和组合均佳。

打工时写的,好多年了.
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PostPosted: 2008-02-21 22:15:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
呵呵,发现一错字。乡村情节——乡村情结?
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荷梦很细心,谢并改了,. Embarassed 请加我:362613891
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 08:59:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

溪语 wrote:

打工时写的,好多年了.


现在当老板了?
羊城商厦里的草鞋价格不菲,当艺术品销售呀
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 21:03:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

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溪语 wrote:

打工时写的,好多年了.


现在当老板了?
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口误无怪,我是从打工到打工.现在在故乡努力地想发点光.
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 07:37:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

楼主在论坛的灯台好亮呀!让我这只小老鼠不断爬上来......
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PostPosted: 2008-02-27 00:44:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

才看到,加了! Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-03-11 10:46:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

乡土情结是人人都有的美好的情愫。
这篇散文巧妙地把儿时穿“爷爷”编织的草鞋的行行脚印,和以后求生存、发展的羊城之旅、生命之旅联结起来,显得格外精巧有深度。
文章的取材、思想情感线索和追叙方法都很不错。
学习了!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 04:23:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

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乡土情结是人人都有的美好的情愫。
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谢过.问好!!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 21:41:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

溪语 wrote:
灯台小老鼠 wrote:
溪语 wrote:

打工时写的,好多年了.


现在当老板了?
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口误无怪,我是从打工到打工.现在在故乡努力地想发点光.

溪语回家乡办实业吗?
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 22:17:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

行文质朴,喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-22 03:12:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢关注!
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